Film version of [link]
Camera: Busch Pressman 4x5 field camera
Film: Ilford HP5 100iso
shooting:
left: f5.6 @ 1/15
right: f5.6 @ 1/30
printing:
left: f4 @ 8s filter 2
right: f4 @ 32s filter 2
a project for productions, critique this Monday. Ack.
Let me know what you think, especially given the difference
between the digital draft and final film copy.
I like this one better. At first I thought I missed the angle, but now that I've flipped back and forth a few times I've decided that I like the squared one better. And the right panel certainly has a lot more character in this shot. Love the contrast on these.
thanks so much for that, i was a bit worried, but I feel the same way you do upon looking at them side by side. It's a relief to have some positive detailed feedback before critique, I really appreciate it,
I definately prefer this verstion of the two- the angled one looks too jaunty for what I think you're trying to capture, and the second frame in this shot has a lot more character and interest.
I love the concept, and photos, completely.
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i think the first frames of both versions are both really nice and it makes it feel like a (short) series already.
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stop the blue pelican before it chokes on the pie
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Jukus
crisp with words floating through the sea in my head,
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Our hearts were made of the same
materials: paper, poppies,
a handful of stars.
my writing
my stock
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Shooting birds off the wire.
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I love the concept, and photos, completely.
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