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shells : film version by `cryptorchid:iconcryptorchid:

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©2006-2009 `cryptorchid
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Film version of [link]
Camera: Busch Pressman 4x5 field camera
Film: Ilford HP5 100iso
shooting:
left: f5.6 @ 1/15
right: f5.6 @ 1/30
printing:
left: f4 @ 8s filter 2
right: f4 @ 32s filter 2

a project for productions, critique this Monday. Ack.
Let me know what you think, especially given the difference
between the digital draft and final film copy.

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~diagonal Sep 22, 2006, 6:54:16 PM
wow, it's beautiful (:

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~pinkandyellow Sep 22, 2006, 7:45:48 PM
i prefer this one. especially the second frame, i could fall in love with that second frame it's so nice :)

i think the first frames of both versions are both really nice and it makes it feel like a (short) series already.

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Mood: Optimism ~faldrengirl Sep 22, 2006, 7:54:05 PM
I like this one more :3

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!DJonasse Sep 22, 2006, 8:32:32 PM
keys are shinier, but i prefer the angles in the digi proof version :)
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~tangledseaweed Sep 22, 2006, 8:52:53 PM
i like the contrast in this more, and just the way it makes me feel,
crisp with words floating through the sea in my head,

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~chenderson Sep 22, 2006, 8:56:27 PM
I like this one better. At first I thought I missed the angle, but now that I've flipped back and forth a few times I've decided that I like the squared one better. And the right panel certainly has a lot more character in this shot. Love the contrast on these. :)

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`cryptorchid Sep 22, 2006, 9:19:51 PM
thanks so much for that, i was a bit worried, but I feel the same way you do upon looking at them side by side. It's a relief to have some positive detailed feedback before critique, I really appreciate it, :hug:
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*citizenfour Sep 22, 2006, 9:56:20 PM
this one's the better of the two. just has more depth in the "emotional imagery" and a natural feel to it. go with it.

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~Atomic-Saboteur Sep 23, 2006, 1:15:45 AM
I definately prefer this verstion of the two- the angled one looks too jaunty for what I think you're trying to capture, and the second frame in this shot has a lot more character and interest.

I love the concept, and photos, completely.

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